Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe
At present-day society, every second is too important to us and we are passing a busy life. Here, we engage ourselves through many things. People are having a hard time reaching a consensus that folks are busy with their various tasks, so they unable to do many well things. As far I am concerned, I believe that community now perform a plethora of tasks than before. There are several reasons to support my reasons and i will explore in the following eassy.
To begin with, we can consider the student life where every student remain busy with their academic life. It is obvious that they get some time to involve themselves. But they do not waste their time and the rest of the time they work for society. For instance, When I was a undergraduate student, i did a number of social works. It is true that i managed blood donation,discourage people to cut down trees and keep the children away from early marriage.
Secondly, people are not to confine themselves in a room. Consequently, we see some dramatic changes in society. For example, during the lockdown in our country, whole the nation was passing a hard time. Therefrore, some folks lost their job, some remained starvation. It is apparent that lots of people came to help them.
Morever, we are not confine in social media. It is widely acknowledged that some human give entertainment through social media. They can reach those people which is unlikely in physical condition.
In the final analysis, despite the fact that society are now busy with their social media, they assist to do many outstanding works. For this reason, I am convinced that they do many unprecedented tasks.
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- TPO 36 integrated writing 40
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- TPO 29 integrated writing task 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...veral reasons to support my reasons and i will explore in the following eassy. ...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...k for society. For instance, When I was a undergraduate student, i did a number o...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ce, When I was a undergraduate student, i did a number of social works. It is tru...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...number of social works. It is true that i managed blood donation,discourage peopl...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , discourage
...It is true that i managed blood donation,discourage people to cut down trees and keep the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80281690141 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69889255577 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4856564955 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209283835736 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585091055544 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721281940868 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051140669 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876219827311 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.