Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport How far do you agree with this statement
These days, people are always busy with their full-time jobs so the time they spend on leisure activities is generally small. This requires human beings to consider which hobby is most appropriate for them. Although there is an opinion that adolescents should focus on cultural activities and can be indifferent to sporting ones, I completely disagree with these views for two reasons.
Firstly, not all youngsters have singing talents and they need to invest a huge amount of money in instruments if they want to pursue them. Knowing that young people haven’t made money yet so paying for them is an impossible task. Whereas sports are suitable for everyone because some sports don’t even ask for professional tools or devices like jogging, aerobics, and yoga, people only need normal health to do sports. Another thing that makes cultural activities impossible for most young people is that they have to attend a place like a theatre that has no privacy and everybody has to share the same space.
Secondly, doing sports is linked to many normal operations of organs. It not only strengthens our muscles but also brings about positive mental health. It means sports practices can decrease the stress level we gain at work and give better growth to our bodies. Many studies have been executed and generally have shown that doing sports can double your productivity in daily routines.
To sum it up, doing sports could promote a positive attitude toward work as well as prevent us from fever or health decline. For that reason, it is irreplaceable by any different activity and frequent sporting practice would be encouraged to decline pandemics.
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport How far do you agree with this statement 73
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theater and less time on sport How far do you agree with this statement 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, another thing, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08791208791 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52868792776 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3507967785 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210869870012 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684877481866 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571252692725 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120155442297 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641748919677 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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