Essay topics:
gre-issue-If rituals did not exist, we would have invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us define ourselves socially and culturally.
If rituals did not exist, we would have invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us define ourselves socially and culturally.
As human beings are social animal, rituals are part of our society. It brings happiness, joy and glory in our trite daily routein. It is true that rituals helps us to define ourselves socially and culturally that is why if it did not exist we would have to invent them. We need rituals because it makes us to celebrate our life. Additionally, it ameliorates our moral values and reflects our culture.
In our daily life surely many of us have expressed ...
Votes
Essay Categories
Essays by user kettyabc
:
- GRE-The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner."Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Cen 90
- In an attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways But this effort has failed the number of accidents has not decreased and based on reports by the highway patrol man 77
- gre- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning. 95
- gre-issue-If rituals did not exist, we would have invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us define ourselves socially and culturally. 90
Sentence: It is true that rituals helps us to define ourselves socially and culturally that is why if it did not exist we would have to invent them.
Description: The fragment rituals helps us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace helps with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: Ceremonies and rituals provides us the golden chance to spend our time with family and friends.
Description: The fragment rituals provides us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provides with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Sentence: It brings happiness, joy and glory in our trite daily routein.
Error: routein Suggestion: routing
Sentence: Rituals drive our life towards positivity and magnanimity.
Error: positivity Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.258 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 436 350
No. of Characters: 2061 1500
No. of Different Words: 214 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.57 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.727 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.445 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.258 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5