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The passage explains the main characteristics of Asthma disease and its etiology and underlying process. However, the lecturer provides some new evidences that may undermine the passage in some aspects.
First, The lecturer asserts that the air tube in asthmatic patients will not return to a completely normal state after each attack. In fact, the air tubes of the patients experience some permanent narrowing in spite of transient nature of attacks. He refutes the claim in the passage that the disease has a temporal nature and airways return to normal state after the symptoms are relieved.
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 9
No. of Words: 221 250
No. of Characters: 1153 900
No. of Different Words: 126 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.856 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.217 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.905 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.848 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.629 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5