The graph below shows the average monthly temperature in three major cities
The line graph compares the average temperatures of 3 different Africa cities per month during a year. Each unit is measured in degrees fahrenheit.
Overall, 3 trends of the temperatures for Kenya, South Africa and Egypt are similar in terms of a general fluctuation. Egypt temperatures go up and down most dramatically.
In the January-February period, there is a stability of the temperatures of Kenya, which is comparatively the same as the figure for South Africa, with 80 and 70, respectively.Meanwhile, Egypt temperatures grow from 55 to around 80.
Interestingly, 5 months later, despite some fluctuations, Kenya temperatures dive substantially to 75, which is 20 higher than South Africa temperatures in July. By contrast, the figure for Egypt surges to over 80, which is the highest point in all time.
Another striking feature is that the Kenya figures grow to 80 at the end of the period, whereas the figure for South Africa is significantly lower at approximately 65. In that month, Egypt temperatures drop remarkably, with 60, lower than the other figures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25433526012 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49852835129 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6158813823 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169570195728 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827216174104 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950785587926 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111197583347 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07520354339 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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