You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should :
apologize for it
tell how it got damaged
say how you are going to fix the issue.
Dear Jini,
How are you ? Hope this letter finds you well. I’ve finally managed to put pen to paper to say why I had not been able to return the electric guitar I borrowed from you last week. I am so sorry that it got broken and I am really guilty for that.
Yesterday, mistakenly one of the strings of the guitar got twisted while I was practicing for my rehearsals. Initially I tried to fix that on my own, and in the process of doing that all the bolts of the guitar got opened and all the strings came out. Although I had repaired my guitar many times, this one was of a different model so I couldn't handle it properly. I’m again so sorry that this happened.
I’ve gathered all the pieces and collected and kept them safe to be sent for repair to the best musical instruments’ shop in the city. They’ve already started with the repair work and will return the guitar by the end of this week. I'll personally come and bring it to you as soon as I receive it.
Once again I'd like to apologize to you .
Regards
Ishween kaur
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| 2021-09-09 | ishween kaur | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jini, How are you ? Hope this letter finds you...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gs of the guitar got twisted while I was practicing for my rehearsals. Initially ...
^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... this one was of a different model so I couldnt handle it properly. I’m again so sorry ...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...urn the guitar by the end of this week. Ill personally come and bring it to you as ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... it to you as soon as I receive it. Once again Id like to apologize to you . ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...as soon as I receive it. Once again Id like to apologize to you . Regards ...
^^
Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Once again Id like to apologize to you . Regards Ishween kaur
^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d like to apologize to you . Regards Ishween kaur
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32994923858 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30014662096 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609137055838 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.459155823 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6153846154 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18214947076 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700681739901 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681123702648 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121281626953 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840156197491 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.