The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the percentage population of ages for yemen and italy between 2000 to 2050.
Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of age group 15 to 59 is expected to increase for yemen and is expected to decrease for Italy.Moreover, over the 65 age group shows the maximum difference over the period of time.
Looking the graph in more details for 2000 , 46.3%of the population was in the 15 -59 age group in the yeman , as opposed to 61.6 percent of the population in the Italy .the percentage of population who belongs to 0-14 age group was 50.1 % for yeman and 14.3% for Italy. The proportion of the population who were in the over 60 was 3.6% but it was 24.1 % in the Italy, which was greatest difference between yeman and Italy age groups.
Turning to the 2050 projections, it is clear that the percentage of the population who are in the 0-14 age group in yeman and Italy is expected to increase with 5.7 % and 42.3 % respectively.57.3 % of the population is predicted to increase for yemen in 15-59 age group, however it is anticipated to decrease to 46.2 % for Italy. In over 60 age group,the proportion of the population is expected to increase in yeman and Italy with 5.7 % and 42.3 % respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65454545455 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84523280532 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404545454545 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3893596972 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352538953467 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23343910394 0.103423049105 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147733839553 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282650873858 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151591445869 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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