Write a letter to the cinema manager (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sarah Sharma, and I am one of the regular visitors to your cinema. I am writing this letter to inform you about my jacket which I forgot in your cinema hall.
Yesterday, I saw the 11 am show of a newly released Hindi movie, namely 'Police booth' in hall no 2A. We were four friends and my seat number was 3W in the third row of the right side.
It is a black color leather jacket made by Tommy Hilfiger. I took it off while watching a movie as I was feeling a bit uncomfortable and forgot to pick it up when leaving the hall. The ticket would also be available in the pocket.
There are some important documents, such as my company identity card and my bank passbook, so it is my humble request to you to inquire about that piece of clothing from your staff and send it to me at the given address. I will pay you the cost of post on delivery.
Looking forward to hearing a response from your side.
Thanking You
Yours sincerely,
Sarah Sharma.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, third, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29787234043 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29291723426 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664893617021 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6683836823 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216785685493 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08034778211 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828730532441 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939061772562 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761330526059 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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