The charts below show the growth in the population of some of the worlds largest cities. Summarise the information given and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts show us the substantial and possible population growth in five popular cities around the world from the year 1990 to 2030, along with the population growth in rural and urban areas around the world.
Comparing the year 1990’s population in the five cities, we can see that Tokyo was the most densely populated while Jakarta was scarcely populated with the population being just over 15 million and an approximate 3 million respectively.
New York on the other hand has been noticed to have a slow accelaration of growth even in the near future of 2030, while the city of Shanghai too has shown slow accelaration but predicted to have a rapid growth in the future.
Cities of Jakarta and Bombay are foreseen to have an exponential spurt of population growth with upto five times in the year 2030 from three million and five million respectively in 1990.
The world rural population grew steadily from 1990 to the mid 1990’s and came to a standstill since 1990 onwards. Urban population rose sluggishly till the late 1990’s and then had an escalation of growth with its peak in 2030.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58705812468 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5235634151 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18304651776 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101469292952 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666030241781 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112880415095 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068445637059 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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