The chart below shows the sleep pattern of people in five different occupations according to a Canadian study. Summarise the information.
The stipulated chat manifests information by a Canadian study of sleep patterns of people belonging to distinct professions.
Overall, the key points to note all that students enjoyed a sound sleep at night whereas doctors got least hours to sleep.
Apropos to the detail of the chart, that pupils are blessed to had a 8 hours perpetual sleep at night from 11pm to 7am. Moreover, truck drivers had irregular pattern. Interestingly, they used to sleep for 3hours in evening and then had 3hours sleep in morning session from 7 to 10am. Apart from this, business executives followed the identical pattern like students except their waking time which was one hour earlier than scholars.
Moving to the further details of the chart, that full time mothers had 6hours sleep like truck drivers. They sleep from 10pm to 6am but had to wake up from 1am to 3am. Despite this, doctors sleep merely only 5hours a day. At first, physicians sleep for 2hours from 1am to 3am however woke up for the next hour and then had continuous sleep for the next three hours
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...patterns of people belonging to distinct professions. Overall, the key points ...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the least'.
Suggestion: got the least
... a sound sleep at night whereas doctors got least hours to sleep. Apropos to the detai...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e chart, that pupils are blessed to had a 8 hours perpetual sleep at night from 1...
^
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the further details of the chart, that full time mothers had 6hours sleep like truck dri...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82417582418 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37243050868 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8713349329 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174346036822 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822750542667 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075527714829 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139997870298 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955256570899 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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