In most countries disabled people are not catered for adequately eg buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding.
What further measures could be taken to assist disabled people?
In many cases disabled people are not cared and catered properly. As a responsible citizen of the country it is our duty to help them as much as we can. Some organizations and charities help them but it is not sufficient and each and every citizen should contribute for them.
First of all, in today’s era money is one of the most vital things in everyone’s life. Hence everyone should contribute some amount for disabled people. As we know “drop drop make an ocean”, a small amount of contribution by everyone can make a considerable amount of money. Many artists’ like singers, dancers, and comedians are contributing from their stage shows. In this way Government won’t be completely relied on charities and organizations for funding.
But money is not the only factor to help disabled people. Another way is to increase their confidence by supporting their strength which is gifted to them. For example, few years back paraolympics was introduced for disabled people where they can play the same sports with the people alike them. Not only this, but some are organizations organizes exhibitions to promote their talent like art and craft, pottery, carpentry work etc. In this way we can support them by increasing their confidence.
Also there are many other ways in which we can help differently abled citizen. For example while constructing buildings, malls, auditoriums etc. we can provide them with elevators and ramp. Now days reservation quota is also provided so that those people who wish to study but lack due to some abilities could fulfill it.
Hence not only Government organizations and charities but it is the responsibility of each and every one to support them and increase their confidence. This can help them to turn their weakness into strength.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple are not cared and catered properly. As a responsible citizen of the country it...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e most vital things in everyone’s life. Hence everyone should contribute some amount ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: drop
...amount for disabled people. As we know “drop drop make an ocean”, a small amount of contr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t them by increasing their confidence. Also there are many other ways in which we c...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...ovide them with elevators and ramp. Now days reservation quota is also provided so t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e to some abilities could fulfill it. Hence not only Government organizations and c...
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Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...arities but it is the responsibility of each and every one to support them and increase their conf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, while, for example, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05762711864 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83491182914 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8340572692 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5263157895 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14960373035 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522853155918 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549019501202 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886366348608 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224763820611 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.