Do you agree or disagree that the media pay too much attention to the lives of public figures?
figures?
It is undoubtedly true that the lives of notable personalities remain unprotected due to how the media intrude into their affairs. More importantly, I personally believe that public proclivity on celebrities is way too much. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my body paragraphs.
To start with, famous people are more or less like ordinary people, which is why they need some privacy. But because they have a large influence on the youth, their way of life has always been at the mercy of their fans. In fact, some publishers even move close to their friends, relatives, children, just to write bombarding articles about them. Similarly, they focus more on their illness, marital issues, and mistakes, not because they want to find a profound solution to their plights, but because they want to attract more readers or adventure to get more money from society. My personal experience is a clear illustration of this. The speaker of the house of representatives was ill for two weeks but the news kept trending to date that he is still on the sick bed even for the fact that he has resumed back to the office. In fact, the journalist went as far as revealing that the country needed to raise money for him because of how critical the situation was. The speaker had to sue the company for sending such rumours to the public. If he hadn’t made such moves, other news media would have imitated him such that the man would be left in despair.
Furthermore, renowned personalities don’t feel secure anymore to get a cup of coffee, which means that they might get involved in a fatal accident because paparazzi will always pursue them to get their shot. However, some do have a bulwark such as guns or probably a guard just to ensure that their life is secured. For example, a septuagenarian thespian was attending a funeral service of her sister-in-law. Stepping out of her room she fell in the hands of photo hunters. She devoted some of her time for them to take her pictures, but they weren’t convince enough.So they had to drive speedily in an attempt to get more photos.But they ended up causing a ghastly accident such that the actress is now managing an eternity brain injury.If they hadn’t intruded that much, she wouldn’t have experienced such brain damage.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I am of the opinion that the media focus too much on the lives of public figures.This is because they hyped rumours of famous people, and because theys intruded their lives such that they get involved in a disastrous accident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, still, for example, i feel, in fact, such as, more or less, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80044843049 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63231086841 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538116591928 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5157129026 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.944444444 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927186635878 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305762815758 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519231733253 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847745474431 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649605802853 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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