Outline why you have selected your chosen three university courses, and explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experience and your plans for the future. Please enter new information and examples here and not duplicate the information you have entered on the work experience and education section of this form (minimum word count: 100 words, maximum word count: 500 words)
I selected biotechnology as my preferred course of study for my master's degrees in these Universities which are; University of Glasgow, University of Aberdeen, or University of Liverpool because it ties in perfectly with my current educational background.
I possess a Bachelor in Science degree in Microbiology from Bowen University, Iwo, Nigeria. In the historical perspective of biological sciences, Microbiology and Biotechnology seems to be closely related and interlinked with eachother. Biotechnology refers to a field that deals with the manipulation of living organisms at the molecular level through recombinant DNA technology also known as Genetic engineering to form useful products for the benefits of mankind while Microbiology is a field of biology that deals with the study of microorganisms in terms of their genomics, proteomics and their applications in food, medical,pharmaceutical and biotech industries. An example of the relationship between them include; The age-old method of fermentation technology in which organisms were used to produce commercially important products. In this scenario, Microbiology covers the natural fermentation of sugar and fruits mashes to alcohol by microorganisms while Biotechnology takes the credit of developing the fermentation technology for mass production and commercialization of alcohol. Thus, prior knowledge in microbiology has provided me with the basic understanding of molecular biotechnology, genetic engineering, Industrial microbiology, introduction to biochemistry and organic chemistry and statistics which part of the subject areas of Biotechnology. Hence, I will be able to cope with the challenges of the course with relative ease.
Furthermore, my decision to zero in on biotechnology has been underpinned by my long-term career goal, which is to rise through the professional rank to become a researcher in notable public or private organizations. I am aware that such important position will require expert-level knowledge and advanced understanding of Biotechnology. Additionally, Biotechnology offers a greater degree of expertise on biophysical applications and computational biology and also helps me to contribute to various sectors and industries. For instance, I can work as a researcher and contribute to the medical field, agricultural field, pharmaceutical and industrial field for the production of industrial products such as foods, drinks, drugs, vaccines, hormones etc. Hence, my desire to become an expert in biotechnology.
Evidently, a rigorous course that equips me with the above knowledge and practical skills and more will therefore be critical. From my extensive research,the three Universities I have chosen offer very high quality teaching in Biotechnology and I am confident that any of the three Universities are well equipped to help me advance my knowledge in this field and will also provide me with excellent opportunities for networking and exchanging great ideas.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iotechnology seems to be closely related and interlinked with eachother. Biotechn...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to offer'
Suggestion: to offer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2549.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8732718894 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67224509803 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534562211982 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0540440551 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.933333333 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853924416292 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027265073603 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326233769442 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638344409735 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332379885254 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iotechnology seems to be closely related and interlinked with eachother. Biotechn...
^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pharmaceutical
... and their applications in food, medical,pharmaceutical and biotech industries. An example of t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Biotechnology. Hence, I will be able to cope with the challenges of the course w...
^^
Line 5, column 641, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., agricultural field, pharmaceutical and industrial field for the production of i...
^^
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... be critical. From my extensive research,the three Universities I have chosen offer ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to offer'
Suggestion: to offer
...ch,the three Universities I have chosen offer very high quality teaching in Biotechno...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2549.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8732718894 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67224509803 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534562211982 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0540440551 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.933333333 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9333333333 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853924416292 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027265073603 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326233769442 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638344409735 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332379885254 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 11.3001002004 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.36 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.