Many efforts have been made by countries to address problems concerning the environment, but the situation has not improved. What are the possible reasons and results of this situation?
Various solutions have been implemented by the government around the world to tackle environmental problems, but the improvements are hardly observed. In my opinion, this could be attributed to the awareness of the public, and there are several consequences that may potentially put humankind at the edge of extinction.
I believe that the reason why efforts made by countries become meaningless may lie in public behavior. First of all, it is clear that due to their convenience and versatility, single-use and plastic bags are irreplaceable products in some services and companies, which accidentally discourage the public from changing their habit to other alternative eco-friendly products. Such a practice makes awareness-raising campaigns conducted by the government seem to be futile because there is a continued rise in the amount of waste, which leads to environmental pollution on a large scale. Secondly, despite the enormous investment into improving public transportation, the preference of using private vehicles is still existing, owing to the time reduction while commuting. As a result, the government’s effort becomes meaningless when it comes to reducing exhaust fumes from personal means.
Therefore, because of the aforementioned solutions have yet to solve the problems related to the environment, a wide range of consequences has been observed. One of the most frequently cited results is that it could be a waste of state budget to invest in solving these alarming issues without receiving any visible changes. This is because this avenue might be used more wisely to invest in other areas initially such as education and economy, which are profitable in the long run. Also, if the environmental problems are unsolved, human beings may encounter higher incidences of detrimental consequences. Climate change, for example, has rendered many people homeless and underprivileged and gives rise to an increase in illegal migration and climate refugees.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that the unchangeable behavior of the public may be the main reason making the government’s effort useless. At the same time, humankind may face some serious consequences such as global warming, if such a trend continues to exist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51585014409 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23460298119 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610951008646 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8599524508 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.714285714 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136431626346 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477054728546 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422457449944 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770863506861 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224631398972 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.