Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking a part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
it is argued that people will benefit more from participating in team sports such as football. other people, however, believe that individual sports such as golf or tennis are advantageous. Personally, I agree with the latter view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some people believe that engaging in team sports has more upsides. The first reason is that this promotes social interaction and encourages individual to think in terms of the team. playing a team sport necessitates perseverance, patience, and practice, all of which can translate into valuable life lessons. one of the major benefits that players can get from playing team sports is that it helps to build confidence. For example, if you have people around you who reward you for being good at something or making a great catch, it will motivate you and make you feel better. Moreover, not only does playing a team sport teach respect for the coach and authority figures, but it also helps teach respect for team players, or in other words, people who should be viewed as equals to yourself.
On the other hand, I believe it is better for people to play sports individually. Firstly, solo sports require each athlete to be responsible for their own learning, movements, and advancement. As a result, they come to accept responsibility for their own successes as well as failures. learning to celebrate accomplishments and cope with mistakes or failures both contribute to an individual's sense of accountability and control. Furthermore, individual sports train participants how to motivate themselves. Because there is no team pressuring them to improve, the inspiration must come from within. This type of intrinsic motivation is often far more powerful than extrinsic incentives. In addition, individual sports can teach players how to be at ease in public. For instance, all eyes are on them during play, and they can't hide in a crowded field, so they have to do their best to be able to perform solo in front of a crowd.
In conclusion, despite the undeniably positive benefits that team sports provide, I believe that individual sports have a greater advantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07605633803 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87699285355 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2923583648 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8421052632 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2631578947 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267580573725 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893238210549 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583951026048 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173292826892 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350177175784 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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