Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries traveled to.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Travelling internationally to enjoy free time and holidays has been a popular trend in recent years, as it allows us to explore different cultures and social practices. Although some individuals still believe that travel has a negative impact on the countries visited, I am convinced that traveling has far more benefits than drawbacks. Therefore, I would like to discuss some advantages and disadvantages of travelling upon the visited countries.
Firstly tourism is vital for the success of many economies around the world. The number of jobs created by tourism in many different areas is significant that boosts the revenue of the economy. As a result, the number of unemployed people in the host country can be reduced. In addition, foreign tourists bring diversity and cultural enrichment to the host country. Tourism creates a cultural exchange between tourists and local citizens through exhibitions, conferences and special events. It is a great opportunity for foreigners to learn about a new culture, but it also provides several chances for local citizens in the host country to learn and develop.
On the other hand, some negative impacts can be pointed out like environmental damage, pollution, erosion, and the loss of natural habitats. Many tourist activities have negative ecological impacts. Snorkeling, hiking, and fishing all have an impact on and deplete the local landscape. Moreover, Reefs and other natural tourist attractions can suffer permanent damage. However, most of these problems are present even without this industry. Therefore, the government should take responsibility for preventing such activities rather than abandoning the tourism business, which will benefit the nation in a variety of ways.
In conclusion, I firmly disagree with the statement below. Global travel, in my opinion, has more to offer these places than it takes away and the merits of international tourism are more notable than its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...he number of jobs created by tourism in many different areas is significant that boosts the re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48184818482 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90778367776 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1383857487 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272381684737 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708406244261 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741935956876 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144199516262 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887464232536 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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