When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A suitable career plays a significant role in one’s life. When selecting a job, many people believe that the most vital aspect that should be concerned is the payment. To the best of my knowledge, I partly agree with this point of view since whether the job helps people to improve or not is also considerable.
On the one hand, a well-paid job indeed brings about several advantages. Without money, people cannot meet their basic needs. For example, everyone needs money to pay for housing, bills, education, health care, transportation fares, and so on. Therefore, people tend to prioritize a job with a high salary which not only covers their demand but also enables them to raise living standards quickly. If people choose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. For instance, artists and musicians, who are known for pursuing their loves, may not always have abilities to live comfortably and raise a family.
On the other hand, what the employment position gives should be considered as one of the most primary features in making a job decision. Personal relationships and working environment are essential. Having good employers and well-qualified colleagues can make a difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. According to many experts, working conditions are among the most significant motivations that make people try harder and devote themselves to their jobs. In fact, the feeling of job satisfaction comes from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn.
To sum up, I agree that people should select a job with a wage that is enough for their living. However, people should consider if the job helps them widen their knowledge, gain more experiences, and reach outstanding achievements. When people can balance between salary and what they receive, they will be able to choose to most suitable job, which, in turn, will open up their opportunities for success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
A suitable career plays a significant role in one’s life. When ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18862275449 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81634056467 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7840339031 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161389195863 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517478801825 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530139488907 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109597210598 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408715065561 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.