Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?
Nowadays, the question regarding senior people’s activities has become highly debatable in social life. Although medical workers recommend different physical exercises for these demographics of society, the latter does not comply with this piece of advice. This essay will discuss the major origin of why elderly people do not pay attention to this and propose a feasible resolution to this issue.
The main reason for the reluctance of senior people to engage in physical activities is the fact that these demographics of society are very sensitive to injuries. This means that old people’s body loses natural strength and agility and becomes prone to adverse consequences of serious stress. In turn it leads to health problems caused by an active lifestyle and increases the probability of heart diseases such as strokes and heart attacks. For instance, the research conducted by the World Health Organisation in 2019 showed that the majority of medical conditions occurring among people at the age over 60 were caused by excessive physical activities. In other words, that means that elderly people do not pay a lot of attention to this issue related to sports.
To tackle the above-mentioned issue the authorities have to raise public awareness concerning positive effects of fitness. Proceeding from this the governments ought to increase the number of health centers and fitness facilities for old people where they are able to work out with professional personal trainers to avoid negative ramifications of exercising. Moreover, a special campaign of sports and outdoor activities should be launched on TV and on social media. Thus, to address the sedentary lifestyle, it is necessary to resort to the aid of governments.
In conclusion, this essay shed light on the primary reason behind the fact that old people avoid an active way of living and offered a viable avenue to solve it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27302631579 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8222208126 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4139819967 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267216442409 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856148265688 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655460281232 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161825308615 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431014838316 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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