Professional athletes are often idolized by young children. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Sport is an integral part of human life especially young people. Young people often idolize professional motivations and learn according to their gestures and gestures. So there are a lot of people who think that athletes always have a responsibility to be good role models for children, but I don't think so.
Professional athletes are talented people, always striving non-stop to be able to improve themselves in all circumstances. That persistence of professional athletes is an inspiration, a motivation for young people today. For example, Neymar, a brilliant striker for Paris Saint, has revealed to a reporter that Messi is an idol, is an endless source of inspiration, someone you've always wanted to be. In addition, Paul Pogba, the Juventus midfielder, once said, Andrea Pirlo and Paul Scholes greatly influenced his play.
However, we humans are not perfect, not even professional athletes, so they will still make mistakes and we should not force them to be perfect role models. Being a person without defects can make them feel stressed. and sometimes it makes them do things they themselves never dared to think about in order to return to their original self. This was evident in Simone Biles' withdrawal from the Olympics. She decided to withdraw from the competition because she wanted to put her mental health first.
I think professional athletes don't have to be perfect people, shining examples. They should be themselves who have good points and weaknesses like everyone else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19834710744 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82798034827 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9524458284 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336021599049 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103830898647 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09703350643 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207126294583 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106828418564 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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