the table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. the charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Discuss summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparison wherever necessary
The table and pie chart illustrates how many people visited the Ashdown Museum as well as the feedback of their visits in two time periods (before and after renovation of the museum).
Overall, During post-reburbishment the number of people visiting this museum has been significantly increased, similarly the visitors satsfaction survey was more positive than before.
The year before refurbishment Ashdown museum had the average visitors of 74,000, however in the following year with the completion of refurbishment number of visitors increased to 92,000.
Survey conducted on visitors fullfilment before renovation revealed almost half the people visited the museum were dissatisfied (40% dissatisfied and 10% very dissatisfied). On the other hand, satisfaction rate was 45% only with 15% of visitors were very delighted and 30% of visitors were just satisfied. However, visitors had a much better experience the year after reburishment and their satisfaction rate grew rapidly, with three quarter of people are happy about their visit to the Ashdown museum (35% of visitors were highly satisfied and 40% voted just satisified). Dissatisfaction proportion among the visitors plundered to less than one quarter during this period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 15% of visitors were very delighted and 30% of visitors were just satisfied. How...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64516129032 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05618562125 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2803190707 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466411422678 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20495350967 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609065869547 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267913433967 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488768216684 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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