The prevention of health problems is more important than the development of new treatments, the government should therefore invest more in prevention. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that more money should be spent on preventive measures than treatments, as they are of greater importance. I completely agree with this point of view.
To begin with, the government should invest more funds in promoting prevention methods to help people save money on medical expenses. This is because by taking these prevention measures, people are less likely to become ill, thus saving money that would otherwise be spent on medical treatments. For example, there was a spread of COVID-19 all over the world, which made it laborious to figure out the proper medication for it and also cost a huge amount of money. As a result, it may be more difficult to preclude these diseases in the future.
Secondly, if the government gives priority to people when highlighting the benefits of prevention, it can encourage people to live a good and stress-free life. For this reason, the government should make proper investments in health care education and awareness programs to raise public understanding of the need to maintain good health habits. For instance, with enough government funds for the best possible treatments to vulnerable patients, people's life expectancy will not be affected devastatingly. Consequently, they may avoid high-cost medical treatments, which could place a large financial burden on low-income people.
In conclusion, the government has to make health reforms properly by investing in the prevention of epidemic health illnesses in order to have better outcomes from health deprived people as well as ensuring a healthy and energetic living for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31102362205 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86530066832 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.266279414 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25714747352 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101219534961 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823635984308 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165646792621 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02576646754 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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