The table compares the production of carbon dioxide in five countries in 2017 and 2018.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented I the graph illustrating the amount of carbon dioxide was emitted in the five given nations between 2017 and 2018.
Overall, it is transparent from the chart that the weight of the composition had distinct differences between china and japan; however, it is also noticeable that china and USA were contrasted between the rate of changes and the amount of carbon dioxide of each individual in 2017 in terms of their ordinal. We can see clearly that, the amount of carbon dioxide was wasted outside had an upward trend in china and India although it was not changed too much from 2017 to 2018; accordingly, it was estimated to increase over 500 million tones in china and 100 million tones in USA. Vice versa, the weight of the composition in the three other nations had a downward trend, regardless of the figure of the lower emission in these countries compared with china and USA in 2017.
On the other hand, each person in 2017 would create 20,1 tones carbon dioxide in USA, when china was the lowest nation with 6,6 tones composition. However, the change of emitting carbon dioxide was reversed between china with 11 percentages and united state with 2 percentages. Besides that, the equalivant figures for Russia, India, and japan were a significant lower both the change sector with zero percentage in Russia, japan and India with 8%. A similar pattern was seen in the three states without the figure (10 tones in Russia, japan and 15% with India).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, each person in 2017 would create 20,1 tones carbon dioxide in USA, when china ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81746031746 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44727727011 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2159532775 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.75 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119283961432 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671121969537 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536528754144 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112912477236 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544145381485 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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