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Dear Kiki,
I am writing to you to let you know that I would like to share about my upcoming holiday next week. This is amazing news for me so I would like to talk with you firstly. My company is having to organize a trip to Nha Trang beach for all staff by the end of this month, from 25th to 29th, November. I am so excited about this trip because Nha Trang beach is my dream destination. The landscape there is so wonderful including sand, a lot of resorts, popular attraction destinations, and delicious food. I am so expected about this holiday. Besides, I come along with all company's staff especially my team: Marketing Department, one of them is my great colleague. My department is planning to open a game show on the trip and I am so amused about this schedule. Also, I hear that you have a business trip near there. It would be great if we can meet each other and have dinner. Once again, thank you for listening to my upcoming holiday sharing and I also would like to see you. Please email me as soon as possible.
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- What is needed in order to become successful talents one in born with or a desire to work hard Which of these two views do you prefer 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32307692308 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46980449708 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0451070975 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 13.0946893788 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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