In modern society, more and more people choose to live on their own. What are the reason people choose to live on their own? Is it a positive or negative trend?
In this modern day, globally, households are shrinking- the wave of leading a solitary life is prevalent among adults, especially young people. However, personally, I'm concerned that fleeing the family nest so soon can have its downsides.
First and foremost, most people prefer living by themselves because they want to achieve the goal to create an independent individual. Some people are craving to enjoy the novelty of social and financial freedom, which means they are at liberty to indulge themselves with whatever they dream of. However, that might sound like a fantasy, others resort to living independently as a matter of necessity. They might come from an abusive family or an underprivileged background which strongly empowers them to move away from their family instantly.
Although it's good for young people to be able to be independent, focusing on moving out can have a detrimental impact on those who are not yet mentally equipped to live by themselves. The likelihood is that emotional loneliness can be a tough challenge. If they are unable to work out through this phase, this will probably accumulate a great amount of negative thoughts and moving out turns out to be a terrible decision. Moreover, having yet obtained enough personal skills like: cooking, washing dishes and doing chores, some people find its struggling to learn how to do it from scratch, which is a burdensome work.. As a result, the novelty of singledom will gradually wear off.
In conclusion, independence and freedom is a really great desire, however, a full preparation is worth considering before living in one-person household.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19011406844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88079967726 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3900820111 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111436113581 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364802262224 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302290373313 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571970464333 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307977337561 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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