You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear ,r silva,
I am highly embraced on your performance on concert, which was stage on last week end at Panaduea urban council indoor stadium.
<r. Silva, actually I would like to convey my heartiest credit on your performance through out the concert. Your voice is unbeatable and still the sound is with my hears.
Actually I am also in the field of music for last five years as a musical event planner. Therefore, music is with my life and every day I deal musical groups and singers in all the Island. Further, I was guitar player and I have my own full band, which is normaly running on indoor activities sucha s hotel functions.
Here by I give my humble request to you, that be part of few activities with my team which will great help for my carrier through publicity on my band. I can share my coming calendar with events for your reference to select dates on your convenient.
Once a appreciate on your performance and wish your future endeavor be success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear ,r silva, I am highly embraced on your p...
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Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...my heartiest credit on your performance through out the concert. Your voice is unbeatable a...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t be part of few activities with my team which will great help for my carrier thr...
^^
Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...select dates on your convenient. Once a appreciate on your performance and wish...
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Line 6, column 6, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...select dates on your convenient. Once a appreciate on your performance and wish your futur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55428571429 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49083872441 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0792529182 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154426253325 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064788480894 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228049411386 0.0603063233224 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08672243755 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106637802567 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.