In the past shopping was a daily household chore, but nowadays it is done as a hobby.
Why is this so?
Is it a pisitive or negative trend?
Today people find going shopping as on of the activities that can be done as a hobby, which before was just a staff included on a daily routine. Availability of shops and time can be the reason for this with having good sides as it can be interesting and useful, yet timeconsuming and in some cases moneywasting.
The shops that can be found in almost every step may be the main reason for the change of people's attitudes towards shopping and accepting it as a hobby. What is more, they are mostly full of the things that attract people's attention to. Thus, even though the person does not want to purchase anything, he or she stops just to observe the shop.
Admittedly, this hobby can be favorable for them, in terms of awareness of prices and buying the things for reasonable prices via negotiating. However, it can be posh hobby for some people who cannot keep the money without spending it. They may simply spend their money in vain without realising what they have done. In addition, it may take a great amount of time, because people want to see almost everything in the shops, because of the attractive presentation of the selling things.
In conclusion, the easy access of the market can be the cause of shopping becoming a hobby. Providing the person does window shopping, without purchasing anything this can be good for them. Otherwise, it can lead to the problems with finance and being lack of time for othet more crusial things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67450980392 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51734162218 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1321057857 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981914909381 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414651513703 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363010600007 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689944244488 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319564057163 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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