Discuss advantages and disadvantages of working from home
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about the effectiveness of working from home compared to working in an office. While being in offices might have some benefits for the employers, in my opinion, the positive effects resulting from home working are far more significant.
I will start by looking at the advantages. First of all, working from home allows us do not to face traffic congestion. Most people claim that they waste much time commuting to work. Moreover, it becomes more difficult to deal with hush-hour traffic. For instance, in big cities people every day at least twice face this problem every and often get stuck in traffic for almost one-two or even more hours. It has emerged that in a city with a traffic density working from home preferably.
Secondly, many people claim that they spend all day in the office and that is why can not spend time with their family. When people work at home they can manage their time. As an example, they can keep a work-life balance and therefore spend time with the family or take time to rest. Working remotely allows people to be at work or home at any time whenever they wish.
On the other hand, working at home separates people from an office environment. In the office workers can be doing work more efficiently, as they are in a team with other colleagues. For example, the worker can improve her experience and team skills in the workplace than from home. As a result, working in the office gives more chances of getting up in career comparatively with working from home.
Another issue is that it can be challenging to manage time rightly and fully complete work on time. In many cases, you can get distracted in your home environment. For instance, it is extremely tempting to turn on the television, waste time on some trivia, or just get extra relaxing. As a consequence, it will dramatically reduce how much work you produce.
All things considered, working at home have its pros and cons. Despite the fact remotely working avoids you from traffic challenges and gives you freedom, many people find it difficult to manage time between work and home. I believe that working from home is less stressful and it's up to you and your ambitions get drawbacks or advantages from working at home.
All things considered, working at home have its pros and cons. Despite the fact remotely working avoids you from traffic challenges and gives you freedom, many people find it difficult to manage time between work and home. I believe that working from home is less stressful and it is up to you and your ambitions get drawbacks or advantages from working at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y can not spend time with their family. When people work at home they can manage the...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'managing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: managing
...her issue is that it can be challenging to manage time rightly and fully complete work on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 5.05154639175 416% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 26.3917525773 273% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 937.175257732 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 459.0 206.0 223% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77995642702 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 3.78020617076 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49398343805 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407407407407 0.622605031667 65% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 290.88556701 239% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 12.6804123711 205% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5033334546 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6538461538 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369113496124 0.216113520407 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145881975908 0.0766984524023 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117865877315 0.0603063233224 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242472562813 0.12726935374 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112084801359 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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