Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face – to – face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.
What is your opinion?
Modern technology helps several aspects of our lives to develop rapidly, including education. Some people think that the online form of teaching evolve common at now lead to it can replace the traditional one while others disagree. In my opinion, learning via the Internet is provisional while the condition or circumstance is not allowed, and face-to-face teaching is still crucial and can not be substituted.
The convenience of learning online brings about us that is the cost for courses on the Internet is not as expensive as the form normal one. Moreover, it is convenient for workers who are usually busy with their work at the company. For example, they get some English classes online in the evening to improve their foreign language. However, students participating in those form classes can be no attention to well. Additionally, they can not comprehend the knowledge because of the interceptions by their family, neighbors, and so on.
Besides that, people can save time and money by studying through the Internet. For example, they do not get the traffic congestion and waste the petrol for going to the class. Nevertheless, with the class at school or center, we get many helpful. For instance, we can make fantastic relationships with many friends easily. Not only that, but we also develop several skills such as teamwork, leadership skills, presentation skill, and so on.
In conclusion, although e-learning has benefited us, particularly for people who study at home during the covid pandemic, the traditional one is pivotal for education and the best way to impart valuable lessons from teacher to student.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne while others disagree. In my opinion, learning via the Internet is provisional...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 264.0 196.424390244 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17803030303 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87968237698 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1879104345 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6428571429 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 5.23603664747 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1443666088 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431068972101 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467315606498 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906279331675 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497552703844 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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