shameless
Nowadays, many people wish they could become famous and often this is their biggest dream. It does not really matter to them by what means they will achieve their goal: maybe become an actor, a musician, a TV showrunner, an abstractionist artist, a journalist, or a politician. I often hear celebrities complaining that being famous is not exactly what it seems to be. Therefore, if I could ask them one question, I would ask: “How the publicity has influenced your life?”.
To begin with, being a celebrity implies that there are many advantages and disadvantages. Besides the most obvious ones, such as the lack of privacy or the constant run away from paparazzi, there might be some indirect consequences that the publicity highlights, from shopping for free to receiving death threats because you said something someone else did not appreciate. Each their step, move, and silly smile is watched and analyzed by millions of curious people. Journalists tend to exaggerate every said word during an interview and because of their influence, other people do not understand that celebrities are still people, with families, problems, and opinion they will stick with. To exemplify, Joan Rolling, the famous writer of Harry Potter, nowadays is being bullied and “cancelled” because some people did not like a message written by her on Twitter. If someone else not so famous had written that, nobody would have observed or even disagreed so intensely with that person. This is the reason I would like to kn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...t understand that celebrities are still people, with families, problems, and opinion t...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07630522088 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78250368134 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646586345382 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8202833833 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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