You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Today, in various countries, multiple children start developing their own businesses at a young age to gain money for the future. Some people consider it as a huge mistake while others think it is an awesome chance to improve their knowledge and help them acquire more experiences.
In a positive view, trying to work at a young age is actually an advantage for children to understand the real meaning of money. When they get exposed to working, they will appreciate the money that they earn, they will realize how precious and valuable money is. For instance, a lazy boy who occasionally wastes money on useless things and refuses to do chores starts to work to earn money, he will realize how hard it is to make money and he will help his parents more and stop complaining about unpleasant things. Once children understand the actual meaning of money, they will not waste it or use this uselessly without considering it. Moreover, if children are engaged in paid work, even the simplest occupations like waiter and shopkeeper, they can obtain numerous experiences through facing with different kinds of customers and calculating the price in a short amount of time. That is because after facing obstacles in their work many times, they will know how to solve the matter correctly and as soon as possible.
On the other hand, if children have to work when they are not old enough, they probably will be enticed by many bad guys out there. When they are too young to differentiate between the good and the bad, they can be easily taken advantage of to do some terrible things such as drug dealing and smuggling. They just follow the adults without considering a thing. In addition, working too early can negatively affect their education and their learning. Because they use most of their time for their career, they will not have enough time to finish homework or take part in extra-curriculum activities at school. They think about how to make money all the time and spend most of their spare time thinking and working. This can destroy their lovely childhood-the period when they do not have to care about other important things, just studying and playing all the time.
From my point of view, I believe that working at an early age does more harm than good. Children need to have a fulfilled childhood when they do not have to worry about how to make money for a better future.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience important for 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76626506024 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49978834929 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522891566265 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.423949578 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.352941176 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176647081129 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664593320023 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326615300393 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112468971159 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157008817638 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.