The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the average percentage of households using energy in each classification and its gas emissions in Australia.
Overall, the largest power is used for heating while gas emission from water heating takes the highest amount, and cooling energy is the least used as well as the least one gas releasing.
Regarding the first pie chart, 42% of energy is used for warming, which is the highest, in contrast to the lowest one belongs to cooling activities of 2%. The following is 30 percent of water heating, which is double the amount of other appliances consumption. Lately, refrigeration and lighting take 7% and 4% respectively.
According to the second chart, the highest amount of greenhouse gas comes from boiling water with its proportion is 32%, less than that is 28% exhausted gas from other appliances. Refrigeration and heating have the approximate proportion, 15%, and 14% respectively, followed by 8% from lightning pollution. The last one is gas from cooling equipment, which only takes 3% in total.
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 67
- The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 84
- The plans below show the public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by reporting and selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of enery in the USA since 1980 with the projection until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'appliances'' or 'appliance's'?
Suggestion: appliances'; appliance's
...ng, which is double the amount of other appliances consumption. Lately, refrigeration and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15976331361 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94009610732 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7797776408 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273466749024 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113215204435 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886584815056 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182289429744 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049944001647 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.