Nowadays, a lot of students study abroad but do not want to come back to their home countries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There remains some disagreement as to the topic of studying abroad. It is claimed that students who study abroad do not want to come back to their home countries. In my opinion, while there are some arguments to the contrary advantage, I still support the negative side of disadvantage.
On the one hand, it is understandable that studying abroad has certain benefits. Firstly, people can enjoy a higher living standard, good facilities, convenient and modern. In addition, people can expect the prospect. Students can earn a job stable with high wages, modern technology, and work with the young generation.
On the other hand, the drawbacks are more significant. First and for most labor exploit, maybe work 24/7, competitive environment lead to stress. More importantly, a victim of racial prejudice, loneliness, homesickness. Consequently, a nation can brain drain, lack human talent.
In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that there is more disadvantages problem that students who want to study abroad do not want to come back to their countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are more disadvantages
...conclusion, I reaffirm my position that there is more disadvantages problem that students who want to study...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05066347194 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1461608121 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279386804741 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928382749739 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161929574015 0.0667982634062 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187415371694 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166100765566 0.056905535591 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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