Some people believe computer and mobile phone technology has changed the way we communicate positively while others feel it has had a negative impact on communication with others.
Technology has changed constantly and that has brought many impacts on societies lifes. Some are positive and some others can have a negative impact.
Life 20 years ago was totally different from our reality. People didn't have internet, mobile phone, computer, etc. But now, we are in a completely different situation. With the creation and discovered of all these things have occurred incredible changes among the worlds.
Including mobile phone on people's life is a huge controversial topic. This can cause faster and better communication between two or more individuals through the creation of groups in certain Apps. However, there is no better way than communicate face to face. The reason I said that is because could there a misunderstand between them. This is caused probably because is difficult to know how laud is the voice of the other person. This is one of a million examples.
Talking about computer, every single person in the world knows all the advantages that this skill brings. Nevertheless, it could be a big help to people who try to make fraud and thefts using internet. To navigate in a safe way, it is really important to do it with consciously and check the authenticity of the site. There are huge rates of people falling in scams when they order an item on internet. However, computer bring uncountable benefits because it allows us to write, create graphs, videos, play games, draw, and to many other functions.
To sum up, I think computer and mobile phone technology has brought a new point of view of the things and facilitate communication between people located even thousands of kilometers away and using it with responsability can have even more positive impacts on our society.
- Some people believe computer and mobile phone technology has changed the way we communicate positively while others feel it has had a negative impact on communication with others 73
- Some people believe computer and mobile phone technology has changed the way we communicate positively while others feel it has had a negative impact on communication with others 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ally different from our reality. People didnt have internet, mobile phone, computer, ...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...te face to face. The reason I said that is because could there a misunderstand between the...
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Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ason I said that is because could there a misunderstand between them. This is caused probably b...
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Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a safe way" with adverb for "safe"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... and thefts using internet. To navigate in a safe way, it is really important to do it with c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, as to, i think, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01045296167 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74755412118 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3046155842 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8888888889 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325250795122 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797805001699 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787427240417 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172960002777 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784563179981 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.