An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgeries. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the present-day world, more people pay attention to improving their appearance through plastic surgeries. While it is understandable the reasons behind this ongoing trend, I personally believe that it may negatively impact social cognition in the long run.
The biggest reason why people choose cosmetic surgeries is to gain self-esteem. In fact, many people were born with physical problems or genetic disorders, such as misshapen noses or overly large breasts, which unfavourably affect their looking. Consequently, most of these people feel self-deprecating about their appearance and even themselves. Also, with these physical shortcomings, they hardly join in many sport activities. Therefore, conducting esthetic surgeries is one of the most sensible solutions, helping them be more confident and love themselves more. As a result, they may perform better at work since they believe in themselves more and can get involved in many physical activities.
Despite the incredible effects of getting cosmetic surgeries, I do not totally think this is a positive development. Firstly, it may have many side effects like infection or scars, which cannot only improve customers' appearance but also worsen. Secondly, those kinds of surgery are pricey and can be spent on other things like investing in studies or improving health. Also, since there are so many beauty hospitals nowadays, finding a reliable one is challenging, risky and somehow, it is the same as they gamble their life in a lottery game. Lastly, if cosmetic surgeries become a popular trend, society will favour people's appearance and disrespect or underestimate internal beauty such as intelligence, compassion, integrity, and sympathy.
In conclusion, conducting cosmetic surgeries has both pros and cons. Therefore, people have to think through before making their decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effects of getting cosmetic surgeries, I do not totally think this is a positive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60714285714 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98923237706 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639285714286 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.73769115 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226768886398 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765535920306 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645581088156 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134722442876 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348327834307 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.