In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes of these problems? What measures could be taken to solve them?
In today’s world, people are encountering more and more physical health issues. In particular, obesity and the weak body become ubiquitous in many countries, especially in developed and developing countries. This essay will look at some primary causes of this and offer some possible solutions to the problem.
There are a number of reasons why a significant reduction in the evaluation of health status has been seen in recent years. Firstly, owing to depending on advanced technology, people are more likely to have a sedentary lifestyle. In many families around the world, they do not need to do household chores by themselves because of the support of domestic devices, like dishwashers, robot vacuum cleaners,... and the lack of physical movements lead to having excess weight. Additionally, with the development of social media, people tend to draw their attention to online entertainment programs in their leisure time, which decreases their interest in outdoor activities or sports. Another reason is that the excess consumption of unhealthy food, such as fast food, soft drink, confectionery goods,... is becoming a concern. A great amount of fat and calories contained in these products can seriously harm humans’ health.
On the other hand, several actions must be taken to mitigate this issue. It is necessary for people to balance their work and lives to spend reasonable time on physical activities, such as doing exercise or gymnastics, yoga, swimming,... In addition, playing sports rather than surfing the web, playing games will be a better choice to lose weight and build muscles. Moreover, one of the most effective solutions to tackle this is to remain a healthy and nutritious diet. Supplement of vegetables, fruits, organic products, and limiting food having a high-fat content should reduce the risk of heart diseases and obesity. Finally, the government should ban the advertisement of harmful products on social media as well as ensure the quality of meals for students at school.
In conclusion, there are various factors leading to the imbalance in weight, however, measures can be implemented to address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35882352941 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86853832304 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6145515053 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164676338212 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416547327095 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041245458328 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099406276105 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207407502168 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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