The number of plants and animals are declining. Describe the problem and suggest some solutions.
It is undeniable that wildlife habitats are being destroyed and whole species of plants and animals are disappearing. There are several causes of this alarming trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.
There are two main reasons why plants and animals are disappearing. Firstly, in all over the world population is creasing day by day and people need more space to live, so for living, in many parts of the world tree are being cut down to make way for farmland on which to grow crops and keep animals. The result of this is natural habitats are being destroyed and in so...
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some mistakes are there like
some mistakes are there like for increasing it is given creasing .
No grammatical or spelling errors.
flaws:
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Different Words: 152 200
More words, higher marks.
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 292 350
No. of Characters: 1446 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.134 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.952 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.614 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.467 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.351 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5