Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion.
Due to the increased demand of high rises and decreased availability of space, high rises are now mushrooming especially in cities. there are numerous advantages in living in a flat, the down side of this trend should not be neglected.
Undeniably, high rises satisfy the drastic demand of rentals in cities to an extent, they are excellent places for short stay. The prices of the flat are less compared to an individual house in the cities. Most importantly, it diminishes the demand of daily commuting and its associated stress and tensions. These places are blessings for people who are supp...
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Sentence: For instance, flats helps people to stay with their children and trim down the time of journey, fuel consumption, traffic block and all other related issues.
Description: The fragment flats helps people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace helps with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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