Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?
Ex-criminals are committing crime after released from prison. I think there are various reasons which make them involve again in crime and solutions to solve this issue.
In prison, criminal meet other hard-core criminals who makes them more violent and learn other ways to do crime by joining inmates of the prison. After released from prison they are abandoned by the society that induces them to do again illegal activity. Due to mentally ill, egoism, inferiority complex, rage makes prisoners to commit again offence. Drug addicted criminal after releasing from prison involve again in drug whi...
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In prison, criminal join with other hard-core criminals who make him more violent and he learn other ways to do crime by joining inmates of the prison.
Involve them in community service which is a type of humiliation and educate them.
In prison, the criminal joins
In prison, the criminal joins with other hard-core criminals who make him more violent and he learns other ways to do crime by joining inmates of the prison.
Involve them in community service which is a type of humiliation and education.
Sentence: In prison, criminal meet other hard-core criminals who makes them more violent and learn other ways to do crime by joining inmates of the prison.
Description: The fragment criminal meet other is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace meet with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace makes with make
Sentence: Involve them in community service which is a type of humiliation and is a part of educate them.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and educate
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No. of Different Words: 147 200
Sentence Length SD: 4.768 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 270 350
No. of Characters: 1432 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.054 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.304 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.728 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.768 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.062 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.16 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5