Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.
Do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, technology change our lives. In the past, people always did their job by themselves, but now everything has done with computers and the Internet. Actually, the rules of work has been changed, we do not have to present at work and we can do our duty in different way.
Work at home has some benefit. First of all, people can save their time. In average, every people must spend one or two hour in traffic to go to work. Consequently, these time will save if people work at home. Secondly, workers that have children can stay with their children and the same time do their job. In additional, when people work at home, traffic become decrease so we can help to decrease pollution. Finally, employer can use an small office rather than a big office, because they do not need much space anymore. They can also save more money.
However, there is some drawback here. Firstly, worker are lost face to face relationship with their coworkers. They have to find a new way to contact to each other. Secondly, worker have to work over the Internet, and it might be has a extra cost for them. Consequently, company has to pay this cost for their employee. Finally, every person do her or his job at different time, so employer must match all job together.
Finally, I agree with this kind of work, but not for all time. This kind of job is good for some times we are have a problems or we want to stay at home.
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Sentence: Undoubtedly, technology change our lives.
Description: The fragment technology change our is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace change with verb, past tense
Sentence: This kind of job is good for some times we are have a problems or we want to stay at home.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to are and have
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You didn't write the essay according to the topic.
When the topic is 'Do you agree or disagree?', you have to either agree or disagree, you can only support one side, you should not change your idea in the middle of the essay by putting one paragraph for 'However'.
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