In some countries, if people need to find work, they have to move away from their families and their friends. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In some parts of the world, people have to move to other places and leave their hometowns for work purposes. This trend is popular right now for some positive aspects, but I believe that these aspects cannot compensate for the negative ones.
On the one hand, living alone in other places without parents and friends can bring people both economic and personal benefits. People often move to other cities or other countries to have better jobs with higher salaries. This means that they may have a more economically stabilized life with a secured job, and this trend can be seen in a rise in migration cases to the US. Furthermore, by choosing to live independently in the absence of both parents and childhood friends, many people can enjoy more freedom in life, such as food to eat, a place to spend the night, or clothes to wear without interference from their parents and friends.
On the other hand, I believe these advantages are outweighed by disadvantages. Higher salaries and a financially secured life may not help those who suffer from homesickness or loneliness that the life far away from home causes. These feelings may destroy people’s enthusiasm and excitement in the workplace or perhaps lead to depression and suicide. Research alarms a high rate of suicide cases in developed countries where people have to stay alone in big cities. Many individuals may also suffer from other diseases, such as obesity or eating disorders when living by themselves because they have no one staying around and reminding them of regular healthy meals. As a result, eating junk food or skipping meals may be the only choice.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of migrating to a different place for work without the company of parents and friends are much more than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66053252815 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8749916581 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226713890596 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776627632041 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058111872399 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128227107069 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253529253797 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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