Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, a heated debate exists over whether it is better to study math and science or art and literature. In my opinion, studying maths and science is more important than it is to learning literature and art. there are several reasons why I feel this way that I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays, the world is developed, competitive, and interconnected, and this is made possible because of science and maths. To cope with hard competition, we need efficient weapons that are science and maths. Today's People can have easier existence for the sake of using different technology. Applied science opens new opportunities for solving problems that surround us. I heard news once that illustrates my point quite well. Overflowing used plastics that contaminate the environment is a serious dilemma for the world, but now, new inventions provide opportunities to reuse plastics. For instance, using plastic to produce asphalt is a consequence of fulfilling science and maths.
In addition, for a long time, science and maths have rescued the life of the public, and the combination of these two key pieces of knowledge relieves the pains of the member of the public by constructing medical equipment. Medicine engineering is a crucial major for achieve to these tools. My personal experience is one of the compelling examples of this; my brother engaged in cancer while his cancer was determined by one of these devices, which was one of the important parts of his successful treatment.
Furthermore, art and literature are inherent knowledge, and using that does not need academic studying, while mastering science and maths significantly needs further time and research; as the saying goes gaining this professional science needs an iron will. Science and maths are based on different knowledge, while art and literature are not essential for achieving it. For example, my sister's painting is genuinely beautiful, whereas she has never studied art at university.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that maths and science are far more important than art and literature; raising knowledge about science and maths is also necessary to lead students to progress in novel inventions and give them a chance to develop consistently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...n it is to learning literature and art. there are several reasons why I feel this way...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25138121547 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93795017567 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577348066298 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1204898683 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.823529412 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320717981591 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101174216568 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992438881456 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183685961499 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998484701721 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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