Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that with the advent of new technologies children becoming less creative than they were in the past. In my opinion, technologies made children not only made children creative but also helped them to learn new skills. I feel this way for several reasons which, I will mention in the following essay.
First, due to the upsurge of covid-19 cases studies of children had adversely affected. Technologies like mobile phones, computers, and the internet helped children a lot in many ways. For instance, if a student is having exams, but due to online classes, he didn't understand some concepts clearly. so, he decided to watch some lectures on the internet. With the internet, he not only understands the topic well but is also able to learn the different techniques to solve the problems.
Secondly, With the use of technologies students can invest their time in learning new skills and even can master a particular skill by devoting less time. Children of the past time have limited resources and due to lack of resources children's minds are not developed completely and this directly causes the slow development of the world.
In the conclusion, technology has made children more creative than they were in the past. More resources directly means more creative ideas
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 213.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06103286385 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66861662489 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596244131455 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9221214932 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279199595959 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106056518566 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118974137064 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181147300794 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107268447951 0.0645574589148 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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