Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
the way of life of each generation will inevitably affect the next generations life. All humans die and what we leave for the future generations will affect them greately. In my view the current populations way of life will have a negative effect on future generations.
Firstly, resources are o fsignificant importance for future generations. The current trends that consist of using the planets resources with no consideration about the future generations will lead to negative effects. For example, many industries use trees as materials but don't try to preserve the greenery by planting trees as they cut some. Because trees take a significant time to grow and become useful for the same industries and with no plans to implant a policy of cut one plant one the future generations would have trouble procuring materials for for the very same industries leading them to have no resources to use papers and other such materials. Not considering that the habitats of these organisms may have been destroyed by the time human beings start to implement such policies. As you can clearly observe the actions of the current human beings will have a negative effect on the lives of our own children.
Second, the pollution levels are rising every day. In todays society human beings take actions that pollute the environment with no considerations just to make their own lives convenient. For example, we use cars to travel from place to place on a daily basis. After a friend of mine got her drivers licence she started driving even to the closest places like the supermarket that was a three minute walk away. She didn't even want to walk such a small distance calling it an inconvenience to walk while she could drive. I believe there are a lot more people doing the same thing and taking the easier route of driving a car to close distances or to places that they could certainely travel to using public transportation in even less time. This action done by millions of people gives rise to greenhouse gasses polluting the environment and leads to global warming.
In conclusion, I believe that our current way of living will have a ngative impact on future generations. Not only are we using the resources of the planet excessively but also polluting our environment with no considerations. We should all pay attention that our children will have to pay the price of our inconsiderate actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...eration will inevitably affect the next generations life. All humans die and what we leave ...
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Suggestion: don't
...y industries use trees as materials but dont try to preserve the greenery by plantin...
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... would have trouble procuring materials for for the very same industries leading them t...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eings start to implement such policies. As you can clearly observe the actions of ...
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...l from place to place on a daily basis. After a friend of mine got her drivers licenc...
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... that was a three minute walk away. She didnt even want to walk such a small distance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9039408867 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77036228325 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524630541872 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3881182989 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.789473684 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299390995471 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100611982335 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112782778876 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210230662159 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123525214521 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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