Nowadays, most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. what are the main causes of this situation? suggest some possible solutions
Keeping in shape is one of the most concerning health-related matters in our society lately. Still, the majority of citizens seemingly tend to indulge themselves in a sedentary lifestyle compared to the past. This essay will outline the sources of the mentioned issue and several optimal addresses.
In terms of society, modern life has been becoming extensively vibrant, specifically in metropolitan areas. Indeed, everyone is already hard-pressed owing to their overwhelming timetable, resulting in less time for exercise or sports activities. This means people will be navigated toward fulfilling their daily needs and other priorities, namely, taking on nightshifts, studying revision, or planning an excursion. Second, in terms of technology, the dominance of advanced e-devices is one of the main determinants of this passive way of living. Since the general public tends to catch them up with the constant development of technology, which will, unfortunately, backfire on them as they gradually become addicted and are willing to sit down for hours in front of the screen or pull an all-nighter for a video game. For this reason, they will miss out the precious time for physical activities.
However, we can put forward several viable solutions to tackle the problem. From the perspective of the authorities, the government should conduct several campaigns to stimulate the benefits of physical exercise. The general health of civilization is consequential, and all individuals are obligated to contribute their parts to the whole. Additionally, a certain amount of public facilities such as playgrounds, parks, or entertainment centers should be on the top of the agenda because these are places where people come not only to practice but also to socialize with others.
In conclusion, there are various causes of this alarming lifestyle, and appropriate steps need to be taken to address them sooner or later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...f this passive way of living. Since the general public tends to catch them up with the constan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08540709076 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1924739767 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110676291543 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335363627166 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260434949174 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607004753682 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166194878839 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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