The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the wellbeing of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leadership is the key quality that differentiates between a leader and a head. The country's growth can be seen from the living life of their people, the happiness of the people, and many such luxuries that can tell the status of the county. For such growth in a county, the country's leader plays a very important and major role. The country is strong under its strong leader. I would be proving 2 reasons for the same.
Firstly. education plays a very important role in a person's life. The literacy rate in a country tells you how literate the people of the nation are. The country's leader plays an important role by providing education to every child. For instance, in India, prime minister Modi is providing free education for every child irrespective of gender or class. Such campaigns help a country to grow from the ground and help them make good leaders which are in other countries leading behemoth tech companies. Education helps the country to strengthen its roots as a growing country.
In addition, some of the important decision is taken by the leaders of the country for the safety of the country. It can be either war-related or pandemic related. After the huge outspread of the pandemic in many countries, the leaders took some important decisions which help in gaining control over the pandemic. Many countries' leaders tried approaching vaccines for the country's citizens and also issues a lockdown in many places. This huge step can only be done by a strong leader who takes care of every issue in the country.
However, It's also important for the citizens to take such help provided by the country leaders to their advantage. In the end, it's the people who have to do hard work and show results.
In conclusion, we can totally agree the country's well-being can be examined by the county's citizens which can't be fulfilled without the help of a strong country leader. Though the leaders help the country by providing the necessary resources and solving people's problems but in the end, it's people's hard work which pays off and gives the necessary results.
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52571673883 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474719101124 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0861913221 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252247003322 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844603301806 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563450064298 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152417974173 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337922419261 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.