Many people believe that the increasing gap between rich and poor people has a negative impact on society. What are the reasons for rising inequality and what problems could it cause?
It is undoubtedly ture that people all over the world have been living in surprisingly developed modern society, while the problem of wealth inequality is a major social issue in many countries. There are several reasons why an increasing inequality has become such a worldwide phenomenon.
One of the prime reasons is that wages has been determined by a market. It has caused the movement of business from the developed countries to the developing countries. As a result, the rate of unemployment has increased in their own country. This rising unemployment rate made them difficult to maintain a stable livelihood. Thus, it has increased the crime such as burglary.
Another reason is the poor public education system. There is a widening wage gap between experts who have acquired a lot of knowledge and non-experts with knowledge. In other words, it means that income varies depending on the level of education. If public education does not play its role, the poor would be less likely to get an oppotunities to succee rather than the rich who can get a private education.
Not only it is not just simple problem in terms of money, but also it can be a serious problem which will make an unsafe society. For instance, the poor can be likely to commit a crime rather than the rich. In addition, an unsafe society and substandard public education would lead to slow economic growth.
In conclusion, governments in the world should try to bridge the gap between rich and poor such as strong creation jobs and the development of public education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26693227092 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.86074600005 2.80592935109 209% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5545401678 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213614294712 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601152291864 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351689070864 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106243350122 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306886880106 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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