Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Technology has made the world a better place to live in. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Technology has revolutionized the world. Although some would argue that technology has caused the world more harm than good, others would state that the world is now a better place to live in due to advances in technology. In my view, Technology has made the world we live in a better place because it has brought about incredible improvements in communication systems, transportation, security, medicine, etc.
To begin with, advancement in communication systems has brought about global interconnections. For example, I currently reside in Nigeria, and my elder sister works and lives in Australia with her family. With mobile phones, we communicate effectively, and sometimes we do video calls it always feels as though we are close by and this takes away the sadness I feel each time the thought of her living far away from me pops up. Whenever I miss my sister, all I have to do is to pick up my phone and place a call to her. Therefore, with this technological advancement, the world is a better place to live in as we can live separately from our loved ones in a different part of the world and still be able to communicate effectively, limiting distance barriers.
Next, the Inventions of cars, trains, and airplanes have made traveling from place to place more fun and a lot more comfortable and convenient. Last Summer, I traveled by plane to Istanbul in Turkey with my mum. The experience was remarkable in that it was my first time traveling such a distance. I was at first scared because I thought the journey will be tiring and stressful but I had a great experience and the journey was a lot of fun. I sat close to the window on the plane and looked out through the window, the view was incredible. My seat was a lot comfortable and each seat had a small TV where you can watch any program. There was also a button beside my seat that is used to call the attention of the plane hostess incase I need something to eat or drink. Before I knew it, it was announced that we are about to land in Istanbul. This journey would have taken days if not for advancement in technology, making the world a better place to live in.
Finally, advancement in medicine has brought about incredible machines to carry out surgery with ease and precision. Last month, it was discovered that my younger sister had to undergo appendicitis surgery. I was really scared and worried when my parents broke the news to me. But my parents explained to me that there was nothing to worry about as my sister won’t feel any pain during the procedure as she would be given anesthesia and that the doctor is well experienced and he knows the exact spot to operate on. With this, I felt very much relieved and my sister went for the surgery within minutes it was done and she felt a lot better. This can only be possible with advances in technology.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly agree without any modicum of equivocation that the world we live in has been made better with technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2465.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62476547842 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79414450318 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484052532833 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 793.8 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1943535759 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.708333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2083333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199856852337 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638518874914 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653612822161 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142021378173 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724137711184 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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