Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our
environment and the kinds of jobs required?
In the contemporary society, following the development of technology, shopping online emerges as the most up-to-date type of shopping and a series of applications and websites are made in order to respond to this need. As a result, it affects some aspects of the environment and creates more job opportunities for citizens.
Looking at reality, it is easy to see that this tendency contributes a lot to reducing greenhouse emissions. Since people can purchase their favorite things by some simple steps, they do not need to go to stores directly. Hence, that gives a hand to decrease the number of vehicles on streets, minimizing the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere significantly. Nevertheless, online shopping can restrict the spread of some dangerous diseases. Indeed, humans have faced COVID-19 epidemic since 2019. However, thanks to this kind of shopping, we can lower the speed of the virus and mortality rate.
In terms of impacts on the job market, this trend helps to diversify careers. There are various jobs initiated such as shippers, online shop’s owners, etc. These days, many people, especially pupils, consider delivery men as part-time jobs to get extra salaries for expenditure. Furthermore, these jobs do not require high-quality certifications. Therefore, people who do not have chances to pursue further education can also apply to earn their lives.
In conclusion, purchasing something on the Internet can alter many sides of our environment. It also creates new job requirements for society and provides opportunities for everyone to improve their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thanks to this kind of shopping, we can lower the speed of the virus and mortali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35856573705 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01867438478 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649402390438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3139235258 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242701204176 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707618054649 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564905956215 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134163199139 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506598980352 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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