In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those crimes
It is knowledge that the amount of crimes is increasing in many countries. This trend is driven by many factors, and some viable solution can be implement to boost the awareness of folks in order to not cause crimes.
There are numberous reasons for this. First off, most crimes are from the poverty. In this life, the cost of living is much more expensive while the salaries still remains. Therefore, a lot of people can not cover their expenses, so they have to commit crimes to from mild such as pick pocket to more serious like kill people to earn money. Secondly, the one who are have unresolved traumatic experiences including bullied or having violent family is the potential criminals. This is understandable that children tend to be influenced by the behaves of people surrounding them. Because of this, if they grow up with violent, aggressive and fierce people, they are more likely to cause crimes.
In order to address the aforementioned issues, they governments should promt the education, which is one of the best way to raise the awareness of people. In addition, the governmenrs also need to encourages their folks not to born children if they are not able to fulfil all the needs of their children. Moreover, they should invest more money to help the poor including building social house, charity food and money fot them.
In conclusion, the reasons for the trend that crimes are increasing is the poverty and the violence of people and the government should invest more on education and social activities to tackle this problems.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...people to earn money. Secondly, the one who are have unresolved traumatic experiences i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...o earn money. Secondly, the one who are have unresolved traumatic experiences includ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
... addition, the governmenrs also need to encourages their folks not to born children if the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ucation and social activities to tackle this problems.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61474792413 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8212008824 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144380903945 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628812895125 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095131341948 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10907229099 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841582284707 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...people to earn money. Secondly, the one who are have unresolved traumatic experiences i...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...o earn money. Secondly, the one who are have unresolved traumatic experiences includ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 198, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
... addition, the governmenrs also need to encourages their folks not to born children if the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ucation and social activities to tackle this problems.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90874524715 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61474792413 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8212008824 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144380903945 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628812895125 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095131341948 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10907229099 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841582284707 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.