The number of people living to 100 is increasing. What do you think the reasons of it? Does it have some effects on individual and society?
Following the development of technology, a higher living standard has been established, as a result, it is currently witnessing an increase in the number of people living to a hundred. Although it shows how good the condition nowadays, it also poses controversial matters on the effect which these old people can bring to the society. Further in this essay, I want to discuss about the on-going phenomena as well as some effects it might have on individual and the world.
First and foremost, it is obvious that in a peaceful time, people tend to pay more attention to their materialistic living, therefore, a higher standard is applied to every single person. For that reason, scientists and inventors develop new pieces of technological devices, effective treatments, all to make the environmental condition better than ever. Along with such inventions, citizen’s awareness has been significantly raised, people know to take care of their health and avoid potential harm in advance. Accordingly, it is no strange to see a person living up to 100 years old.
On the other hand, the long lifespan itself may not be a gift to many people. They are often under an uncomfortable influence of sicknesses and illnesses, which makes them suffer. Moreover, they are sometimes being considered as a burden not just in the society but also in the family. These people are constantly required with medical attention, bringing inconveniences to themselves. Another point worth mentioning is that the rising number of elders can lead to a pension distress for the government.
In conclusion, due to the great innovations, human have better quality of living and manage to prolong their age. In spite of some disadvantages, these hundred-year-old people are still a crucial spiritual value to each family and deserve to be honored for their contribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19063545151 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07411897819 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4549624292 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.857142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220037909042 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606485051616 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476307909518 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119629961327 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067642516475 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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